Its Wednesday night do you know what that means!? X Factor Premier! If you didn’t watch you don’t know what your missing! The judges, Simon Cowell, Demi Lovato, LA Reid and Britney Spears, are both shocked and disgusted in what they see when some of the contestants come on stage. They start off in Austin Texas where they meet some people who have the talent and others who as Simon says “should have never been let on stage.” One young lady comes on and impresses the judges they say they have a good start to their day. Their not so lucky after her there were a lot of people who didn’t live up to the standards. Another older man comes on he is 50 years old, Shaun Paterson, he claims to be the best and says he’s a song writer/dancer Simon seems skeptic about this one everyone else is so far entertained Shaun says he is singing his original song, he sings, and gets kicked. off Britney looks at everyone shocked at what they just saw, Simon comments that he “should never sing again” they see more and more failures later in the show one young lady comes on and she claims to be “the best” and “no one can beat her” she sings Fireworks by Katy Perry and completely bombs the song she was very monotone with her voice. Simon, LA, Britney and Demi all agree that she “sounded like she was dying” and “should never sing on TV ever again”. As she leaves in a hissy fit LA asks “where’s all the talent?!” Well they got talent when they came to San Francisco but he defiantly was different Quatrele walks on stage with a wedding veil, white jacket, short white lacy shorts, fish nets and well yes he’s shocking to look at, the judges ask him questions about himself, he defiantly isn’t afraid to be himself! He sings and blows the crowd away LA is the first to speak up he denies Quatrele to go on Demi, Britney and Simon all let him through to the next level. LA asks Simon “What happened to you?! Your nice all of a sudden!” as that day goes along there’s more No’s than Yes’s.
One man Don Phillups comes on stage and instantly Britney recognizes who he is, about 10 years ago they recorded a song together he had gone through some hard ships so he stopped singing he came back to try to make a come back. He sings Halo by Beyonce, Simon stops him in the midst of his performance and tells him that he’s not what their looking for Demi and LA agree that he wont be making it through. He turns to Britney hoping she will say something good to him, the only thing she can bare to get out is “No”
He goes off stage an emotional wreck, Britney tears up a bit as well. They move on to Rhode Island where they meet Janelle Garcia, she has a “Pat Benatar sound” and they like it the judges are very impressed with her and tell her “they cant wait to see her again”
Next they meet a young lady Julian age 19, she comes on stage and her and Demi hit home they both went through similar struggles in their life Julian was also bullied growing up, she sings Who You Are by Jesse J and starts crying after the songs finished Demi tears up as well gets up from the judges table to hug this young lady Demi continues to tell her “you’ve made it this far don’t give up you’re a strong girl” the judges have nothing but complements for her Simon and LA both say they have never heard so much pain and emotion put into a song the way she sang it, she makes it through to the next level.
X Factor Day 2
Back to the fun of X Factor, they start out in San Francisco again where they meet Johnny a young man just trying to make it in the big time, LA and Simon enjoy his stage presence, Demi and Britney tell him he has a good voice and he makes it through to the next level. Next a girl named Alexa comes about she tries to talk down to everyone making herself seem better, when she walks on stage Demi and Britney both look at each other like where did she come from she sings Promises by Nero, no one was impressed she sang very monotone and blah they tell her she wasn’t good enough. More and more people come on stage and no one impresses the judges. Back to Rohde Island they go where they meet Patrick, who believes he is Britney’s brother, he walks on stage with a bouquet of flowers for Britney pours his heart out to her about how he loves her and how they are related he tells the judges that hes going to sing Circus by Britney as hes singing they all look at each other in shock he was just about half crazy and half terrible. When they stop him to tell him he didn’t make it he freaks out telling everyone how he loves Britney, which freaks her out, they tell him he didn’t make it and he storms off stage in a huff. After more people they finally get one a young girl named Carly, 13, sings Feeling Good by Nina Simone and does amazing she blows away the judges Demi says that she is “absolutely obsessed with her now” and Simon tells her “A star has been born today” and she makes it trough to the next level. Don’t forget to watch the next episode to see what happens!



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ReplyDeleteWell written hand has just the right amount of details and hilights. I didn't see your own opinion or analysis. The tone is fun and conversational which I enjoy but the use of words like"blah" may not be the best words to use. Although just about everybody is familiar with the x- factor there still needs to be some backround information.There are fwe minor grammar mistakes that can be easily fixed but the current format I see is one long paragraph that recap.
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ReplyDeleteMost of the main points were mentioned, and has very good sense of personality included in the article. There was a few grammar errors and mechanics error. But i feel like it was what made it show your personality more in your article. The use of links and pics were used perfectly and directly towards what we would like to know more of the characters, and the episode clarity of the show was stated. The tone of the article, like i said earlier brought out your personality which is good. Overall good job.
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